I just read the story. It's ok, I mean- it's relatable to some extent. But the conclusion is a bit eh. I guess it depends on the readers how to interpret that, but I'm a bit disappointed since the build up is so good but after that it feels so short. I understand due to the limitation of time your team might not be able to make a longer one. Also you might need a proofreader because I spot quite a lot mistakes, typo and grammar-wise. Still I appreciate for your first VN, this is pretty good. The main menu video is cool too.
Thank you so muchh!! We appreciate the feedback.. We will repair some of the typo, grammar, and other issue in the future. Your opinion is so important for us. Once again, thank youu NSAID!! ❤️❤️❤️
yoooooo, i just played your game, and it looks really cool and sad (seems like i got the sad ending for natalie) especially when natalie starts to feel dilemma and thatt COOL video come up and also u guys really detail about the music scoring (i didn't expect for the heart beat sound effect) good job ^_^
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I can translate your game into Spanish, if you wish.
Thank you for reaching out to us claudia, Sure If you want to do that go ahead I'd love too
You are aware that I am offering a service, right? as long as you understand it seems fine to me.
I appreciate the offer but If it's a paid thing, I'm sorry I'll have to decline. I'll keep you in my if i need your help, thanks claudia
I just read the story. It's ok, I mean- it's relatable to some extent. But the conclusion is a bit eh. I guess it depends on the readers how to interpret that, but I'm a bit disappointed since the build up is so good but after that it feels so short. I understand due to the limitation of time your team might not be able to make a longer one. Also you might need a proofreader because I spot quite a lot mistakes, typo and grammar-wise. Still I appreciate for your first VN, this is pretty good. The main menu video is cool too.
Thank you so muchh!! We appreciate the feedback.. We will repair some of the typo, grammar, and other issue in the future. Your opinion is so important for us. Once again, thank youu NSAID!! ❤️❤️❤️
yoooooo, i just played your game, and it looks really cool and sad (seems like i got the sad ending for natalie) especially when natalie starts to feel dilemma and thatt COOL video come up and also u guys really detail about the music scoring (i didn't expect for the heart beat sound effect) good job ^_^
Thank you so muchh!!! So glad to hear it, remembering that this our first time making visual novel. :33